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Īśopaniṣad with Śaṅkara's bhāṣya · 17

vāyur anilam amṛtam athedaṃ bhasmāntaṃ śarīram | oṃ krato smara kṛtaṃ smara krato smara kṛtaṃ smara

Translation. Let my breath, as I die, cast off its individual limitation and attain immortal Anila—the cosmic Self, the Self of all (sūtrātman); [let the subtle body (liṅga), conditioned by knowledge and action, depart]. Then let this body, offered into fire, end in ash. Oṃ—O Resolve (kratu), remember; remember what I have done. O Resolve, remember; remember what I have done.

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Word by word

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vāyuḥvāyupass
anilamanilapass
amṛtamamṛtapass
athaathapass
idamidampass
bhasmāntambhasmāntapass
śarīramśarīrapass
oṃoṃunsupported
kratokratupass
smarasmṛpass
kṛtamkṛtapass
smarasmṛpass
kratokratupass
smarasmṛpass
kṛtamkṛtapass
smarasmṛpass

How the commentary settled it

Where the verse alone is ambiguous, the reading follows Śaṅkara's commentary; the deciding lines are quoted below each decision.
Vāyuḥ means the dying speaker’s individual breath (prāṇa), and the verbless opening is completed with the optative pratipadyatām, ‘let it attain.’
→ The speaker’s breath is the nominative subject of an expressly supplied pratipadyatām; ‘my’ and ‘as I die’ come from the commentary’s mama mariṣyataḥ.
isup [1]athedānīṃ mama mariṣyato vāyuḥ prāṇo 'dhyātmaparicchedaṃ hitvādhidaivatātmānaṃ sarvātmakamanilamamṛtaṃ sūtrātmānaṃ pratipadyatāmiti vākyaśeṣaḥ /
Now, as I am about to die, let vāyu—breath—abandon its limitation to the individual self and attain Anila, the immortal cosmic Self, the Self of all, the Sūtra-Self: this is the completion of the sentence.
Anilam amṛtam is one masculine accusative phrase, the goal of pratipadyatām; amṛtam is not a neuter nominative referring to the body.
→ Masculine accusative singular amṛtam modifies anilam and stands in apposition with adhidaivatātmānam, sarvātmakam, and sūtrātmānam.
isup [1]athedānīṃ mama mariṣyato vāyuḥ prāṇo 'dhyātmaparicchedaṃ hitvādhidaivatātmānaṃ sarvātmakamanilamamṛtaṃ sūtrātmānaṃ pratipadyatāmiti vākyaśeṣaḥ /
Now, as I am about to die, let vāyu—breath—abandon its limitation to the individual self and attain Anila, the immortal cosmic Self, the Self of all, the Sūtra-Self: this is the completion of the sentence.
The translation marks an additional clause understood by Śaṅkara: the subtle body (liṅga), conditioned by knowledge and action, is to depart.
→ Include the clause in brackets to distinguish commentary-supplied syntax from overt mantra wording.
isup [2]liṅgaṃ cedaṃ jñānakarmasaṃskṛtamutkrāmatviti draṣṭavyam, mārgayācanasāmarthyāt /
And this subtle body, conditioned by knowledge and action, should be understood as [governed by] ‘let it depart,’ because that is entailed by the request for a path.
Idaṃ śarīram is nominative and bhasmāntam is its compound predicate under the supplied bhūyāt: the body is to ‘end in ash.’
→ A bahuvrīhi with vigraha bhasma anto yasya tat śarīram, nominative singular in agreement with śarīram; the body is understood as offered into fire.
isup [3]athedaṃ śarīramagnau hutaṃ bhasmāntaṃ bhūyāt /
Then let this body, offered into the fire, become one whose end is ash.
Oṃ is retained as a sacred utterance but interpreted here as the symbol of reality-natured Brahman called Agni, not merely as a generic exclamation.
→ Retain ‘Oṃ’ in the translation and construe the following invocation within Śaṅkara’s Agni-Brahman interpretation.
isup [4]om iti yathopāsanam oṃpratīkātmakatvātsatyātmakamagnyākhyaṃ brahmābhedenocyate /
‘Oṃ’ is uttered in accordance with the worship: because Oṃ is its symbol, reality-natured Brahman called Agni is spoken of through non-difference.
The vocative krato addresses Agni under the aspect of resolve or intention (saṅkalpa), rather than denoting a sacrifice or an abstract cognitive faculty without personification.
→ ‘O Resolve (kratu),’ with Agni as the intended addressee.
isup [5]he krato! saṅkalpātmaka! smara yanmama smartavyaṃ tasya kālo 'yaṃ pratyupasthito 'taḥ smara /
O Kratu! O you whose nature is resolve! Remember what is to be remembered for me; its time has now arrived, and therefore remember.
isup [6]etāvantaṃ kālaṃ bhāvitaṃ kṛtamagne smara yanmayā bālyaprabhṛtyanuṣṭhitaṃ karma tacca smara /
O Agni, remember what has been cultivated for so long; and remember also the deed performed by me from childhood onward.
Kṛtam is the substantivized object ‘what has been done,’ specifically the speaker’s performed karma; the four imperatives are kept in their repeated form because the repetition expresses reverential urgency.
→ ‘Remember what I have done’ is repeated, with the first smara also allowing the broader contextual object ‘what must now be remembered.’
isup [5]he krato! saṅkalpātmaka! smara yanmama smartavyaṃ tasya kālo 'yaṃ pratyupasthito 'taḥ smara /
O Kratu! O you whose nature is resolve! Remember what is to be remembered for me; its time has now arrived, and therefore remember.
isup [6]etāvantaṃ kālaṃ bhāvitaṃ kṛtamagne smara yanmayā bālyaprabhṛtyanuṣṭhitaṃ karma tacca smara /
O Agni, remember what has been cultivated for so long; and remember also the deed performed by me from childhood onward.
isup [7]krato smara kṛtaṃ smareti punarvacanamādarārtham
The repetition of ‘O Kratu, remember; remember what has been done’ is for the sake of reverence.

Śaṅkara's commentary on this unit

1athedānīṃ mama mariṣyato vāyuḥ prāṇo 'dhyātmaparicchedaṃ hitvādhidaivatātmānaṃ sarvātmakamanilamamṛtaṃ sūtrātmānaṃ pratipadyatāmiti vākyaśeṣaḥ /
2liṅgaṃ cedaṃ jñānakarmasaṃskṛtamutkrāmatviti draṣṭavyam, mārgayācanasāmarthyāt /
3athedaṃ śarīramagnau hutaṃ bhasmāntaṃ bhūyāt /
4om iti yathopāsanam oṃpratīkātmakatvātsatyātmakamagnyākhyaṃ brahmābhedenocyate /
5he krato! saṅkalpātmaka! smara yanmama smartavyaṃ tasya kālo 'yaṃ pratyupasthito 'taḥ smara /
6etāvantaṃ kālaṃ bhāvitaṃ kṛtamagne smara yanmayā bālyaprabhṛtyanuṣṭhitaṃ karma tacca smara /
7krato smara kṛtaṃ smareti punarvacanamādarārtham